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If I told you I loved you
Would you believe me?
If I said I'd stay with you
Would you simply leave me?
If I gave you my heart
Would you just throw it away?
If I told you all I felt
Would you have naught to say?
If I said I liked your smile
Would you frown a little more?
If I said I liked your eyes
Would you stare down at the floor?
If I said it'd make me happy
If we just hung out more
Would you deny your feelings?
Would you walk out the door?
If you really just can't accept love
Do you expect me to waste all of mine?
If you won't let me into your life
Do you expect me to try all the time?
If you're really sure you don't want help
I guess its time this love dies
But its so very hard to not meet your gaze
When you stare at me with your sad eyes
Would you believe me?
If I said I'd stay with you
Would you simply leave me?
If I gave you my heart
Would you just throw it away?
If I told you all I felt
Would you have naught to say?
If I said I liked your smile
Would you frown a little more?
If I said I liked your eyes
Would you stare down at the floor?
If I said it'd make me happy
If we just hung out more
Would you deny your feelings?
Would you walk out the door?
If you really just can't accept love
Do you expect me to waste all of mine?
If you won't let me into your life
Do you expect me to try all the time?
If you're really sure you don't want help
I guess its time this love dies
But its so very hard to not meet your gaze
When you stare at me with your sad eyes
#037 of 100 Theme Challenge - Eyes. January 2009
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I really love this piece. It's sad, but full of meaning and there's a sort of subtlety to it. I mean, just reading, all of the words seem laid back but really there's something else there.
This is really cool. Keep up the good work! c:
This is really cool. Keep up the good work! c: